The "REDEEMER'S LAW" Project

My brother just told me some people have been unab...

2010-01-23T15:36:49.396-08:00

My brother just told me some people have been unable to post comments here lately. I don't really know what's up with that...I've been able to, and a couple of new ones have come in in the last month or so. But to anyone who's having trouble, please try clicking on the link to view other comments. That SHOULD provide you with the comment box.

Also, for a look at what I&

To Anonymous -- sorry I haven't responded to your ...

2010-01-11T06:03:58.642-08:00

To Anonymous -- sorry I haven't responded to your post before! And nah, it's okay, your criticism is valid. :)

To Aaron -- that's high praise indeed! Thanks! I'm really trying to carve out some time to revise this book and start on the next one, but my freelance career is keeping me pretty solidly occupied (for which I am not complaining in even the tiniest way). :)

I just finished reading your book and wanted to sa...

2010-01-10T23:08:03.722-08:00

I just finished reading your book and wanted to say thank you so much for spending precious time to create such an awesome story!
Tomorrow is my payday and anything I can find that you wrote is on my shopping list.I actually cried in some parts.

Thank you! It's immensely gratifying to get commen...

2009-11-28T11:15:56.995-08:00

Thank you! It's immensely gratifying to get comments like yours.

At the moment, my freelance career has taken a sharp up-turn (I've just finished writing dialogue for two video games based on a popular film franchise, I'm about to start on one starring a beloved comic book character, and I'm doing a variety of comic book projects), so finding the time to revise a novel

I have just read through the whole thing in about ...

2009-11-28T10:38:37.769-08:00

I have just read through the whole thing in about 2 and a half days. I couldnt put it down. If you dont finish and publish this sometime, it would be a major loss to avid readers around the globe.

Thanks! (I think this chapter is what prevented m...

2009-11-21T21:28:53.766-08:00

Thanks!

(I think this chapter is what prevented my sister from letting my nieces read this book. ;) )

This chapter is definitely a keeper. Kudos on what...

2009-11-20T17:13:40.456-08:00

This chapter is definitely a keeper. Kudos on what has so far been a greatly entertaining read!

great! bring on the sequel. don't leave us hanging...

2009-11-01T16:40:26.004-08:00

great! bring on the sequel. don't leave us hanging with matt and deidra/glory! give us closure.thanks for a great read.danny scott

That's definitely one of my objectives. :)

2009-10-31T09:30:39.591-07:00

That's definitely one of my objectives. :)

if your objective is to make readers care about ma...

2009-10-31T08:00:02.977-07:00

if your objective is to make readers care about matt, you've achieved it.

Well, I'd like to think they get better. :) I'm lo...

2009-10-31T05:33:44.413-07:00

Well, I'd like to think they get better. :) I'm looking forward to seeing what YOU think, though.

I have yet to start on the re-write. Things have gotten sort of...hmmm..."chaotic" doesn't do my life justice...things have changed this summer, and on top of a few interesting personal developments, I have so much freelance work right now I can't even begin

im no critic but i love this story. I hope the cha...

2009-10-31T05:20:16.101-07:00

im no critic but i love this story. I hope the chapters to come are as good or better.

High praise indeed! Thanks, JS -- I'm glad you enj...

2009-08-17T05:55:13.169-07:00

High praise indeed! Thanks, JS -- I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Excellent work; better than Heroes, better than Wa...

2009-08-16T21:00:09.057-07:00

Excellent work; better than Heroes, better than Watchmen. The dialogue is top notch. Everything fits and makes sense. It's believable.

The technician said, “Well, I like this segment be...

2009-08-16T16:00:47.518-07:00

The technician said, “Well, I like this segment better than the one we did on quilting.”

Great line, I laughed out! The argument was good, too. I'm glad I was right about what happened to Nathan; it makes the anti-Redeemer side more believable.

It's not confusing because (if I am recalling corr...

2009-08-16T15:51:08.691-07:00

It's not confusing because (if I am recalling correctly) up until the end of this chapter our only frame of reference regarding Simon's mother comes from Simon himself; and he clearly doesn't always know what is real. So, his mother's apparent youth could be the result of augments, or plastic surgery or his own unstable mind.

I don't care much for the character Nathan and his...

2009-08-16T14:45:45.074-07:00

I don't care much for the character Nathan and his teenage angst; so good riddance! Besides, Nathan can do more for the story by dying as an "imitator of the masked vigilante" because that would logically cause the cops to turn up the heat on Matt's nocturnal activities.

Thanks, guys! I hope to start the revision process...

2009-07-16T14:02:16.339-07:00

Thanks, guys! I hope to start the revision process in earnest a bit later this summer. :)

Really enjoyed reading this...sorry that it's ende...

2009-07-16T08:53:50.964-07:00

Really enjoyed reading this...sorry that it's ended!

A great read! I look forward to seeing what chara...

2009-07-13T16:00:15.019-07:00

A great read! I look forward to seeing what characters return and what other Augments show up.

Thanks, Paul! I hope to dig into the sequel later ...

2009-07-09T20:49:08.100-07:00

Thanks, Paul! I hope to dig into the sequel later this year. :)

Loved the story. Cant wait 4 the sequel.

2009-07-09T11:12:39.051-07:00

Loved the story. Cant wait 4 the sequel.

Not sure what's happening here -- either Blogger i...

2009-07-09T07:47:44.789-07:00

Not sure what's happening here -- either Blogger is doing something strange, or, more likely, I've lost the ability to count.

Should be fixed now! I think! :D

where is chapter 44?

2009-07-09T07:43:21.895-07:00

where is chapter 44?

And here we are -- it kind of snuck up on me. I'm ...

2009-07-05T20:07:42.614-07:00

And here we are -- it kind of snuck up on me. I'm even more awash in freelance projects at this point than I was the last time I mentioned such things, and now that the book is all here, I don't even know how to feel about it.

I will be revising it, but probably not within the next month. I'll be amazed if meeting every deadline I have right now, within the constraints I