tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9062762397615175281.post8510930809461301406..comments2009-04-26T20:37:01.512-07:00DAN JOLLEYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16082943779915835855dan@danjolley.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9062762397615175281.post-47903869137731147172009-04-26T20:37:00.000-07:002009-04-26T20:37:00.000-07:00

I like this chapter, but now that I read it really closely, I think I might feel the same way about it as I did the one in which Diedra deals with the realization of what Matt can do. I don't know that I demonstrated the ghoulishness of Nathan's parents sufficiently, and what I did felt too talky and too expositional. I'm definitely going to have to give this a hard look during revisions.

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