tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9062762397615175281.post1344841717982715020..comments2009-03-08T17:06:26.190-07:00Comments on The "REDEEMER'S LAW" Project: CHAPTER 13DAN JOLLEYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16082943779915835855dan@danjolley.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9062762397615175281.post-5974543738900492622009-03-08T17:06:00.000-07:002009-03-08T17:06:00.000-07:00I am VERY fond of that sentence myself, so I think...I am VERY fond of that sentence myself, so I think that one'll remain safe. :)DAN JOLLEYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16082943779915835855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9062762397615175281.post-67833761356757559892009-03-08T17:03:00.000-07:002009-03-08T17:03:00.000-07:00Okay. You can rearrange stuff however you want. ...Okay. You can rearrange stuff however you want. You can have her NOT kiss him. You can have 'em go line dancing if you like. Just don't do anything to that last sentence.Concolorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04605746039564562696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9062762397615175281.post-16961077396381366512009-02-22T21:16:00.000-08:002009-02-22T21:16:00.000-08:00I don't know about this section. I definitely want...I don't know about this section. I definitely want Matt and Diedra to go out and start to get to know each other, but my own perspective on relationships has changed so vastly in the last twelve years...I kind of like the whole scene, but I'm afraid if I really start digging into it I might find reason for some extensive revisions.<BR/><BR/>So don't be surprised if this bit gets a serious DAN JOLLEYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16082943779915835855noreply@blogger.com